For David:
Even though you provided a lot of background information, you should do what you told me to do and provide more background info regarding what the reaping is, and describe the relationships between different people. Could there also have been another reason for her to have written the book? Wanting to put your feelings out for the world to see in the form of a book seems to be the generic reason to write a book, it doesn't seem special in any way.
For Amber:
What is the point of the fire? I would like to know more because you just seem to though it out there, but you don't explain what it stands for or what it represents. Also, does the is the gem only there because it was the initial thing that the fought over, and it was how they met? I would like to know more about that.
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